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Warriors - Final Illustration by =Derranged:iconDerranged:


©2007-2009 =Derranged
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Submitted: December 5, 2007
File Size: 554 KB
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Resolution: 900×1200
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Make: HP
Model: HP pstc3100
Date Picture Taken: Dec 4, 2007, 8:32:00 PM

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Fucking Hell.


Approx 12+ hours. Of Pain.


Done for my final drawing assignment.

CRITIQUE THE LIVING SHIT OUTTA THIS!! 8D Please! I dun care how many mistakes or ickies you can find in this, since this isn't anything personal really.

The lion thingy isn't Myuu, btw, just a random lioness. :/
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I love that bat... thing x3

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The main problem I see is that the sword looks like it curves around her back, a little. I think it's the perspective. The lioness' left leg looks like it might be a little too far away from her crotch. I love the little bat thing, it's adorable, but you don't really need to outline the highlights on the eyes, unless that's a stylistic choice.

The composition is good, though. I really like how the spires in the background are unlined. I also really like the actual design of the sword.
Lol, my friend actually recently pointed out the sword handle going a little wanky too. Oopsies!! >w>' *should've used a ruler, uurg!* I think about it now and agree with you, I could've erased the jellybat's eyeliner, haha! Thanks for your crits!!
The handle to the sword is a little wonky... but someone already pointed that out.

...I dunno Derr, that's the only thing I see wrong. The rest is just derr-licious. :D

Especially the eyes and the tilt of Derr's. Those are some of my favs.
Umm... can I just say that I love this pic and I don't want to say anything bad about it. lol The character design is awesome. The colouring is awesome. The background is awesome... and I love it. ha ha ha

Seriously.

(the lion girl thing kind of creeps me out though. lol)

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Yeah, you're the 3rd person to mention the handle. It was never noticeable when I was colouring it, that's why it was able to get away from me. XD' Plus I never ever use rulers to draw straight lines... I guess I should start using them more now. ^w^'
Hm..*is bad at critique* the only thing I can really say is the lioness' left eye looks like it should be bigger, unless that's your style =o otherwise, this piece is pretty amazing. I like the backround and all the rocks and stuff :]

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Whoooooooa, this is the coolest! It might take me awhile to find something wrong with it...

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I LOVE the background. It's triple amazing.
Did you try out the new coloring style on this? It looks great!

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